PERSONAL college essay

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I need a personal essay for college application. I am searching for an essay that begins with something small and rather silly and ties into much larger implications. I HAVE HIRED 4 DIFFERENT WRITERS FOR THIS SAME TASK AND HAVE NOT RECEIVED ANYTHING I WISH TO SUBMIT.

For example, see this link and scroll to see the “Fried Rice” essay. https://apply.jhu.edu/application-process/essays-that-worked/
This girl wrote an essay that begins with a simple recipe for fried rice, however, she goes on to say that a real fried rice recipe is not a recipe at all. Rather, it is all immeasurable and 100% improvisation. She continues to say how spontaneity and organic creation are the basis of her life and appreciation. I am searching for something similar to this!!!!!

Here are some things about myself for reference: I am a female, I live on the beach, I am a member of multiple clubs and school activities, I love to sing, play piano, guitar, and ukulele (I do not want my essay to be completely about music), I love art, I am very interested in becoming a lawyer, I do speech and debate, I am a perfectionist and very independent (I do anything and everything for anyone in need), I have done several internships, and I am jewish attending a catholic school.
It must be an exceptional essay that can be deemed as personal and will get me into a good school.

PLEASE let me know the topic before it is written!!! I have used 4 other writers and haven’t quite received anything to my liking to submit.

I am happy to share any additional information about myself that may help with this essay, I just am unable to do it myself because of writers block… I have tried everything but nothing seems good enough. Please let me know if you are interested and what I can do to help. I will do anything to ensure this essay is perfect and will still pay full price and offer my own help. Thank you